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pacifier
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Posted on 02-14-08 11:51
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Cerine
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Posted on 02-15-08 5:13
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Dananah
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Posted on 02-15-08 8:24
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nck bro!!!...i like to quote someone who once told me " let it flow!" :oD..dun put a dam like some idiot!;oP (tho it wasnt to this high standard and calibre :oD hehe)..seriously u do have a gift of the gab!(didnt come to this conclusion just cos of this post ;oP hehe) :oD...so pls share more with us underprivileged :oD hehe ------ pacifier aka Mr Optimistic?;oP hehe..well thats wat u seemed to me from the above post..dun mind me for coming to such a quickie assumption of u...but it was meant in a good way :oD...keep it up?yeah one can be even more optimistic? ;oP hehe.. ----- ceruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! miss monosyllabic!!..dun be shy to show more words! we know ur hiding them!lobini?;oP hehe.. hope alls well with u? guess wat? met some bhais today..they were pretty shocked(hope in a good way) about me being into mangas haha..shared some spoilers with them since they only watch animes..but yeah ..hows on ur side?:oD..want me to share more?i havent been catchn up much on them for a while :oS..hope alls well :oD
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cheli
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Posted on 02-15-08 9:33
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Poetry is very good as usual, no doubts on that and hats off to you. But, don't feel so alone. Be optimistic. " Kishi roj unse mulakat hogi, Tumhari jaan usdin, tumhare saath hogi." and one huge question!! Why did u said that "yo kabita malai sunya jasto lagyo" ? (mero arko thread ma)... Kaha sunya jasto lagyo?????
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norton
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Posted on 02-15-08 10:00
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नेप्चे ले यो गाममा नि छोड्न भ्याएछ। राउँरो छ।
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Nepal ko chora
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:40
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Pacifier, thank you very much for the "optimistic extension" of the poem. Glad to have you here in the thread.
Cerine, I am happy to hear that you found those lines "awsome". Thanks for short yet sweet compliment. ![](http://light.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-smile.gif)
Dannah bro, I really appriate your suggestion. I will try to come up with something "un-dammed" next time hai ta. Thanks for dropping by to leave a note.
Cheli, thank you very much for those generous note and facilitatory suggestion. It gives a sense of satisfaction when the readers come up with nice words. ![](http://light.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-smile.gif)
नेत्रे जी, तपाईं लाई कबिता राम्रो लागेको सुन्दा मलाई पनि खुशी लाग्यो। पढेर प्रतिकृया स्वरुप दुई शब्द छोडिदिनु भको मा मुरी मुरी धन्यवाद छ। ![](http://light.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-smile.gif)
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uptowngal
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:43
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wowwwwwwwwww greattttttttttttttttttttttt
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pjna007
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Posted on 02-15-08 11:53
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Another (depressing ![](http://www.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-tongue.gif) ) masterpiece !
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dipika02
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Posted on 02-15-08 12:04
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nepche, wow !!! I really appreciate the words u've chosen to describe the solitary, keep it up my fren, your poems are beyond venerable...simply awesome
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Nepal ko chora
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Posted on 02-15-08 2:04
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Thulee, I am glad that you liked those lines. Thank you very much for the boosting phrase.
Pjna (Aka Prerana), life is like a pendulum whose extremities are "elation" and "depression". The leg of the pendulum swings from one end to another periodically. So, expressing something on gloomy part of the life once in a blue moon is not a bad idea, is it? I am glad that you found a "masterpiece" in those verses. Thank you very much for those charging remarks. ![](http://light.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-smile.gif)
Dipu, thank you very much for those respectable words. Frankly speaking, I don't want readers to revere my stanzas. I appreciate it when they come up with their honest comment/reactions. But it does give a bit of self-satisfaction when readers like the work. Thanks for your continuous support which means a lot to me. ![](http://light.sajha.com/sajha/chat/smileys/m-smile.gif)
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