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Hi_nanu
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Posted on 03-13-07 12:46
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तिम्रा ति परेलिले केहि भन्यो कि मन्द त्यो मुस्कानले केहि बोल्यो कि मनमा तरङ्ग त्यसै छाइ दिन्छ किन किन तिम्रो माया त्यसै लाइ दिन्छ तिमि हास्दा हासेको यो मन, तिम्रो उदासतामा त्यसै रोइदिन्छ खै के हो के भो किन हो तिम्रो झझल्कोले त्यसै सताइदिन्छ
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raascal
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Posted on 03-13-07 12:50
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Hi_nanu
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Posted on 03-13-07 3:40
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raascal ji,thanks for your Wah wah....... but I really do not think that above piece deserve any appreciattion.I am a lazy kind of person which reflects in my writing.I did not try to polish rough patches in above piece.
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sprakashp
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Posted on 03-13-07 3:59
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राम्रो छ है नानु राम्रो छ । निरन्तरताले राम्रोपन बढाउँदै लैजान्छ । राम्रोपन बढ्दै गएपछि सुन्र हुन्छ । शुभकामना !
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sprakashp
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Posted on 03-13-07 4:00
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नानु मैले सुन्दर हुन्छ लेख्न खोजेको अर्कै भएछ । रिसानी माफ होल नि हैन !
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